Concrit

Dec. 23rd, 2028 03:06 pm
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Okay, I've been running Kurama for nearly a year and a half now, but since this is a whole new Kurama from a different point in the series than I'm used to taking him from, concrit is appriciated.  And I mean Constructive Criticisim when I say this, any comments to the effect of "YOU SUCK, DROP NAO, GDIAF YOU BETCH" will be deleted with much enjoyment on my part.

Anon and comment screening are enabled and while I'm not disabling IP, I don't pay attention to that anyway, so don't worry about that.  Kurama's the techno savy, not me.

deadly_garden: (Stern Kurama)
Let's see if I can do this. Shouldn't be too hard, there are only thrity here and I get to pick five of them.

001.Evidence002.I'm here003.Funeral004.Puppy love005.Gloves
006.Blackboard007.Muse008.Magic009.Clean010.Secret
011.Superstition012.Fantasy013.Test014.Tease015.Storm
016.Strawberries017.Weapon018.Beach019.Lost020.Cry
021.Aloof022.Blood023.Tower Block024.Taxi025.Search
026.Writer's Choice -- Scars
027.Writer's Choice028.Writer's Choice029.Writer's Choice030.Writer's Choice


Cheer me on, guys. It'll help. ^^;
deadly_garden: (Kurama - Kurama and Shiori)
We celebrated my twentieth birthday yesterday. It was more important to Kaasan than it was to me, but I understand why, it is a big year after all.

It's hard to believe I'm twenty years old, I don't seem any different from when I arrived on this community three and a half years ago. Still, it was an enjoyable day and it made her happy, which is all I ask for.

...I do have to admit though, it wasn't without a little bit of sadness. I used to share this day with Kuroba Kaito, and would look forward to wishing him a happy birthday in return. With Ryudo-san gone now as well, a day that I once spent with friends is something of an empty one now.

Happy Birthday anyway, Kuroba-kun, even if you aren't here to see it now.
deadly_garden: (wtf?)
...I cannot believe my behavior last week.  I have always despised the methodology of the Phantom Thief, the lacking logic.  To find myself actually following and believing it... I even posted a heist note, by Inari.  And I called myself Kaitou Kitsune?  How ridiculous.

Kid, even after having lived your life for a few days I still cannot understand you.

...Also I still find myself in possession of the Earth's Opal.  Kid, could I bother you to return it for me?
deadly_garden: (Kurama - Kurama and Shiori)
This memory opens up with a door opening and a young boy, clearly Kurama’s human side at age six by the mop of red hair, is seen entering it.

I'm home! )

((And purple is Kurama's human mother, normal as always being Kurama himself.))
deadly_garden: (Kurama - Showing Fear Now)
[He sounds strained, and possibly a little insane?]

Scratching, clawing, digging.  Scratching, clawing, digging.  Scratching, clawing, digging.

[He's growing more frantic as she speaks, faster and louder and much more desperate.]

There's something in there, something trying to get out.  I can't let it out, can't let it out.  Has to stay inside, unacknowledged.  Ignored, for the sake of everyone else.  Safer, for them and for me.

Blasted fog!

[The last is said in a hushed whisper]

19th Rose

Jan. 13th, 2010 09:22 am
deadly_garden: (wtf?)
The plants won't let us out of the den today, same as they wouldn't yesterday once I came home from checking on Kaasan.  I was barely able to return at all; traditional world hopping is obstructed.  I had to walk around until I found a weakness in the barrier.  Koenma doesn't seem to have any ideas what could be behind this.

I'm concerned.  What little fog that manages to leak through is this disgusting yellow shade, not the reddish tint I've grown accustomed to in the Makai.  The plants have informed me that Kaasan, Kuronue and I are not the only ones who have developed headaches.

...Theirs are worse than mine.

Kuwabara-kun, Touya, have you been experiencing the same?  And does anyone else have any idea what this could be?  I'm afraid I'm only getting bits and pieces of information at this point.
deadly_garden: (Kurama - Beach and Ocean)
[The microphone clicks on and the clink of glass meeting wood sounds close by. Shortly after that is a sigh.]

I would say someone shoot me now, but the marksmanship club might actually take me up on that. And I think Kuronue might have a problem with that idea. So no sense in tempting fate.

[There's a small chuckle and a short silence.] I've been back at this school for nearly a year and a half and it seems so little has changed and yet I'm still learning everything all over again. Maybe Yuusuke was right; I shouldn't have bothered to return. He did tell me it was a lost cause.

But... someone has to remember that students have rights, and someone in a position of authority has to stand firm with them. And these kids need a sympathetic teacher. There's never enough of them, even with the Dylandys, Gavin-sensei, and a few others. I just have to hope I'm doing enough.

Baby steps, Minamino. Eventually things will turn out for the better.

[In the background there's a shout of "Oi, Kurama!" before he chuckles softly.] On my way, Kuro-ai.

[There's the sound of him setting down the glass and shuffling before the audio times out. Replies will be voice.]
deadly_garden: (Kurama - Reflections)
[At first all you can hear is faint music, the song vaguely identifiable as being in Greek. A few moments later a male voice joins it, his pronunciation slightly off and halting. Soon enough it ends and the voice sighs.

Seemingly thinking that the recorder hadn't been on until now he starts to speak.]

There are days... when I sincerely hate what I've done with my life. Never my distant past; I'm quite content with that. It's what I've done recently that I loathe. Lying to her. Staying here.

Before Kuro was returned to me... I had no qualms staying here for the rest of her life. It was only proper, after all. She raised me, put up with me when I was an ungrateful child. I can't leave her. [soft laugh] I never could, really.

And then I found Kuro and the tournament happened and suddenly it felt like home again. It was a feeling I missed. [chuckles again] It was a feeling I liked. It was nice, being myself again with no questions asked.

[He's quiet for a long moment, only the white noise indicating that the recording was still active] I should go back, to be with Kuro as we used to be. To do as we used to do. But... I have school to finish, my mother and younger brother to take care of. [A deep sigh] I don't know what to do. But... I have time to decide. Time tends to be there always.

[And feed cuts out. All replies will be in voice unless otherwise noted.]
deadly_garden: (Kurama - ...And then it rained fish.)
Cuddy-sensei, I was wondering if you would permit me to come to your home?  I've offered to trim Fire Lord Azula's hair for her and she informed me that I should ask you first.
deadly_garden: (Sad Yoko)
Kurama sighed, watching Kuronue. This was the second time he'd had to deal with the bat not knowing him in the span of a month. The last one was a virus, but this...

Whoever that girl was, he was going to find her and kill her, but not until after he tortured her for her indiscretions.  No one lived to speak about doing harm to Kurama's if he had anything to say about it.  And he usually did.

He debated with himself for a brief moment before holding out his hand.  "I won't judge you.  I don't think I ever will, in fact.  If you're hurt, you can tell me. I won't breathe a word to another living being, I swear."  He took a deep breath, hoping his heartbreak wasn't bleeding through and showing on his features, though it came out through his voice.  Strained and with the tiniest bit of pain, he added, "Please, Kuro-ai.  Please let me help."

deadly_garden: (Kurama/Kuronue)
Kuro-ai, what do you say to watching the Kid heist tonight?  From the sound of it, it should be quite interesting.
deadly_garden: (OOC - I Wanna Take You To A Gay Bar)
-- Kuronue
-- Love/lust/crush
-- Family
-- Rivals/"Law Types"
-- Close friends
-- Friends
-- Acquaintances
-- Standard dislike
-- GTFO, deadly hate

Yes, those are kanji. First one is gold, the rest are numbers 1-8.

This isn't as long as I thought. )

TELL ME IF I FORGOT YOU. Seriously, I has memory of goldfish. Will be updated periodically. Last update: September 25, 2009
deadly_garden: (Yoko - "'Yoko Has Returned;' They Cry.")
Yoko stood in front of the clearly deranged bat, paying no attention to the body scant inches from his foot. His arms were crossed and his eight tails waved and twitched in obvious annoyance.

This was not the Kuronue he had woken up next to that morning. No, this bat was unhinged, speaking nonsense -- Buried beneath the roses? Him? Honestly. -- and obviously had suffered a head injury of some sort. This was not something the fox wanted to deal with in the slightest, though it was obvious that it would have to be dealt with swiftly.

Illusion, delusion, hallucination?  Yoko was none of these things and would prove it.

His voice was cold, void of emotion that he couldn't spare at the moment.  "Kuronue, explain yourself.  Now."
deadly_garden: (Yoko - Golden Eyes)
So, virus plotting!  YYH cast, DCMK cast, and anyone connected to said casts, heads up!

Kurama

So, here's the idea for him, and the one I'm going with.  What if he'd never been attacked by that bounty hunter?

This would result in his never becoming Shuichi Minamino and not having that human influence that's lead to... a shit ton of his current character, actually.  So he'd still be a thiefy and will be participating in Naoto's Plot of Thiefy Compition, and he'll be a lot more... uncensored and forward.  And demony.  Can't forget demony.  Where the phantom thieves would be going for just a kiss, he'd make an attempt at outright seduction.  Mun decrees he'd fail of course, it would be way the hell too awkward post-virus.

This also means that if I am forced to use one of the red headed icons... please pretend it's a Yoko icon with the same expression?  It's freakishly difficult to find Yoko icons. Scratch that, Z's a lifesaver, I found or made another eighteen or so icons.

Haibara

Her... I'm not so sure on.  I'm thinking either What if she'd never joined the org? or What if she'd never made the Apotoxin?

Both would result in her having her normal body, but I honestly don't feel like digging around for Shiho icons.

EDIT: There's also What if her sister Akemi hadn't died? But I'm not sure what'd go on there.

Need some help there guys.  Thoughts?

deadly_garden: (Kurama - Soft and Hard)
OOC: Majority (As in, all but two or three lines of Kurama's after Kurama and Kuronue walk into Yuusuke's room) transcribed from the anime, episode 111, second half. Figured it'd be better to do it this way than shoehorn the bits of dialogue that I wanted in this at awkward places. Normal text is Kurama, italics is for Yuusuke, bold and italics is for Kuronue, and bold is for Koto and [Spoiler here, read the video post to find out who won the tourney]. Done with Lii and Z's permission.

Not Cut ICly )
deadly_garden: (Kurama - Sadness in Red)
[The microphone clicks on and almost immediately you can hear Kurama sigh.  When he speaks, his voice is muffled at first, as though his arm is in the way.]

Kuro lost.  And he's hurt.  Not as badly as he was a month ago, but... Angie-san, can you get another hop to come and examine him for me?  I've already treated most of it myself, but a second opinion would be... comforting.

[There's a shuffle of fabric as he pauses, then his voice sounds wooden.]

It's down to Enki now.  The sparring partner to a dead King of Makai.  He's the only one standing between Mukuro and the throne.  Tomorrow morning is the final round.  Yuusuke is still unconscious.

Things are not looking good for us.

[Audio ends]

((I'll stop spamming soon, I swear!  Canon progression's nearly over!))

deadly_garden: (Kurama - Gardening is Not Girly gdit)
[And another video from our fox.  He's bandaging up his arm yet again and his lip appears to be... chewed on?  And bleeding.  His clothing appears singed and burnt in a few places and is missing half the back of his tunic.  His pantslegs are torn and bloodstained, though the skin underneath is bandaged.  He suddenly looks up at the camera and scowls, his lip bleeding just a little more from the action.  He jerks his head to the side]

I assume you've all heard that Kuro beat me.  Yomi lost to his opponent and Mukuro defeated Natsumi.  Tomorrow Kuro has his battle with Enki and then whoever wins that will go onto the finals.

I pray that Mukuro will lose to one of them, whoever it is.
deadly_garden: (Kurama - Profile)
[We have a very close close up of Kurama's eyes before he steps back. He's looking quite a bit better than he did after his battle, though his arm is still bandaged and he's got a few bandaids on his face. He crosses his arms and looks sternly at the camera.]

I'm going to get this out of the way. While I'm thankful for those of you who were concerned about my well being, you really did not need to worry. I fully intended to go to the medical wing after Hiei's fight. Touya, I believe you were there when I said it.

Now, to matters that actually do matter. As you have likely heard, Hiei lost his battle to Mukuro, and Yuusuke has lost to Yomi. Yuusuke is currently unconscious in the medical wing as we speak, and has been since his loss. This puts us in a very...[He shakes his head, knowing that Yuusuke would not be pleased with him saying this] undesirable position. In fact, it makes myself and Kuronue as the only two standing between them and rulership of the Makai. Unless you count Natsumi, Enki, and some unknown, no name demon that Yomi's next battle is with. I can only hope that the next two or so days prove fortunate.

[He shakes his head again, then glances off to the side for a moment. When he glances back at the camera, he has a highly devious look on his face.] My next battle is with Kuronue. This will be quite... [He pauses expectantly, as though for dramatics' sake] interesting. We even have a bet riding on it. Cheer for me to strike first blood, everyone. [He winks, and then the screen goes black]

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